Finished My Personal Statement!!...Draft 1

Good God, it was a challenge holding back the whining! The story I told was about me being discriminated against, so you can imagine how tempting it was to lash out about how awful people are, and sound like a bitch and/or an undesirable in the process. Word count: 1500. This is pretty good for meeting the requirements for most of the schools, but there are some martinets who are demanding it fit in 2 double-spaced pages. Esta loco!